Rough cut

The amendments still to be made in our opening sequence are as follows:

• Titles should be changed to look more professional by changing the font and the colour. This is because sometimes the titles cannot be seen as the white isn't a bold enough colour. 
• We still need to come up with a film title and incorporate that in the correct order in our opening sequence. 
• At 0.28 seconds, our protagonist's head is out of frame. Therefore, we will have to re-shoot this shot.
• A sound effect of a phone ringing still needs to be put over the top of our footage to make the sound more prominent.
• At around 1.03 the clip needs to be edited to give the impression to the audience that the train is stopping so that continuity is established. 
• A lot of clips need small editing at the beginnings/endings to eliminate shaky-ness.