- Victoria-Louise's analysis of Shutter was really good because it had very in depth information which clearly showed she'd taken a long time over the work.
- I also think that her other two pieces of research were good because they were contrite and to-the-point which is useful because it means we don't have to read the whole extract in order to gain points.
- The analysis within her work is good and will be useful for us in the future.
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